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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 07-27-2009 06:35 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Hello, I've been gone for quite some time now. And only recently have I been able to come up with something to write. I think its okay, but I'd like to know what you think, thanks.

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loneliness Pictures, Images and Photos

Seasons change four times a year.
The leaves fall to the ground,
the snow begins to melt,
and the colors come to life.

It's easy to talk about the season's,
and how the colors fade with ease.
There's no problems in the way,
nothing to make it stop.

People have seasons too.
Ours aren't as beautiful.
Our changes aren't as graceful,
and the colors are not so pretty.

Someone breaks down,
and falls to their knees.
Everything they've ever experienced,
is escaping through the tears that fall from their eyes.

We are only human.
You can't expect us to be perfect.
We all have different seasons,
will you accept mine?

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

© Copyright 2009 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
Falling rain
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1 posted 07-27-2009 08:15 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I liked the message. It was different. Different is good. Keep writing. And I like the picture.
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 07-27-2009 08:18 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thanks, i just wish the picture wouldn't have shown up so big, its over-powering.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Clockwork_Orange
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3 posted 07-28-2009 01:15 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

this was well written and an interesting read. i cant wait to see more from you. its an honor to read your words.
Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n
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4 posted 07-29-2009 10:38 PM       View Profile for Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n   Email Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n

very nice i do like the comparisons
N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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5 posted 07-30-2009 05:27 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet

The grace of your writing
Is only to be compared to
That of the wind.

To compare the wind to that of scripture, that is the task.


Beautifully captured.

-LostPoet
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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6 posted 07-30-2009 11:02 AM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

thanks so much both Talh1n0vl3v1tat10n and Lost Poet.
i'm not worthy of the words you spoke, Lost Poet, but thank you.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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7 posted 08-09-2009 10:31 AM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

That was a very good read! It's good to have you back here.

~Alli~
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