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Falling rain
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Six months have passed
I'm over you by now
But I'm left with an empty feeling
Never understanding how

I can't comprehend on
Why I feel I'm missing out
I hate how I end up here again
Following down an old route  

The cold, the hurt
Its nothing new to me
But I feel a heavy burden
Holding me under for a long time, see?  

I'm getting sick of it
A nice guy finishing last
Where I'm left with nothing here
Reminiscing on the past  

I know its pathedic to say
How I alone I really feel
But I'm feeling lucked out
Getting the bad end of the deal
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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hey, i'm going to reply on here too...because this is amazing. and i love it. library a million times if i could.
*hugs*

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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dude. anthem. thats about all i can muster up here.
arabesque
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3 posted 07-28-2009 09:09 PM       View Profile for arabesque   Email arabesque   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for arabesque

Wow, that was really really good.  I LOVED the second to the last stanza.  The whole thing flowed very well.  And the picture fit perfectly   Amazing write!
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 07-30-2009 02:08 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Aw, Zach, I really like this.

I can really relate, too.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

Penwing
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5 posted 07-30-2009 02:57 PM       View Profile for Penwing   Email Penwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Penwing

I enjoyed your write as I do them all. keep it up.


(I am also in a particulairly good mood because this is my 50th post so i am now a full member!!!!!!)

,Penwing

 
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