They didnít think I could make it They thought I was broken But Iím standing here proud and strong And for once, I donít need to belong
I used to cry all the time Now Iím the one who shines People still talk But I know I still rock
I didnít know how to deal before But since Iíve gone through that I know Jesus really is my savior I know now it doesnít matter whether Iím skinny or fat I know Iím strong and can make it through whatever I now know that Iím better
I know that I can make it through the bad Whatever obstacle comes my way To other peopleís dismay I stand here with God as my comrade
I know Iím beautiful I know that my family Will remain true and loyal Whether Iím sad or happy
I know that God will help me fight my demons I know that my heart is my strongest weapon
I feel triumphant Because I made it Iím nobodyís twit Because Iíve arrived
It's great to be confident in yourself (: I must say, I like how your stanzas aren't all the same...they all just sort of melt into each other. Yea, that made no sense but I hope you get what I'm saying. Great poem (:
NJ; United States
I don't know if I've been stuck in a pattern when writing but the different stanza's just bugged me a little. But that's prolly just me. I liked the over all message in the poem. Just be careful too much confidence could rub off as arrogance or narcissistic. Good write though.
Space Camp, IN
this was really encouraging. i like the flow of words and how it blended together. it was very nicely done. but yeah, just be careful that too much self-confidence doesn't come off as pride. over all it was wonderful!
.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.