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precious pearls
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Hazel Eyes

She looks into the mirror
And her eyes change color
From a grassy green
To a blueish gray

The girl in the mirror gazes back
And her eyes began to tear
Why do I look this way?
She asks herself with disdain
Every time she begins a new day
She sees herself as plain and ugly
Who is this girl you might ask?
She is me

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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1 posted 07-31-2009 11:48 PM       View Profile for crosscountry83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crosscountry83

I wonder why no one has commented on this poem; it's really good.  Remember, what's on the outside isn't as important as what's on the inside.  If you're anything like your poetry, you're beautiful on the inside.
precious pearls
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2 posted 08-19-2009 03:12 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

Thank you!!! That means a lot to me...

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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i agree
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4 posted 09-03-2009 08:21 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

I am new but i have read your poems and if your poems reflect you on the inside you are a very beautiful person.
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5 posted 09-03-2009 09:45 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Kai, I have hazel eyes...and think they are rather unique since they change with my moods and dress. And you know, I sometimes feel the same even though I am much older and wonder why it is that our brains and  minds have our eyes seeing differently than we really are.

for a touching write
Maureen
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6 posted 09-03-2009 09:17 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I have hazel eyes too!



And I like your poem - I think we all see our flaws more than our beauty.  It's just how it is.  So, don't be hard on yourself - I bet the others are right and you truly are beautiful.

Alison
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7 posted 09-16-2009 03:25 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

awww thanks u guys... really, i just sometimes wonder what would happen if i didn't have hazel eyes, u kno brown instead... that's what makes me think i wouldn't b as "pretty".....
But thnks 4 da comments anyway... i appreciate it

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

 
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