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precious pearls
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since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

0 posted 2009-07-25 09:32 PM

Hazel Eyes

She looks into the mirror
And her eyes change color
From a grassy green
To a blueish gray

The girl in the mirror gazes back
And her eyes began to tear
Why do I look this way?
She asks herself with disdain
Every time she begins a new day
She sees herself as plain and ugly
Who is this girl you might ask?
She is me

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

1 posted 2009-07-31 11:48 PM

I wonder why no one has commented on this poem; it's really good. Remember, what's on the outside isn't as important as what's on the inside. If you're anything like your poetry, you're beautiful on the inside.

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

2 posted 2009-08-19 03:12 PM

Thank you!!! That means a lot to me...

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2009-08-21 05:38 PM

i agree

madelyn
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since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

4 posted 2009-09-03 08:21 AM

I am new but i have read your poems and if your poems reflect you on the inside you are a very beautiful person.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2009-09-03 09:45 AM

Kai, I have hazel eyes...and think they are rather unique since they change with my moods and dress. And you know, I sometimes feel the same even though I am much older and wonder why it is that our brains and minds have our eyes seeing differently than we really are.

for a touching write
Maureen

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
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6 posted 2009-09-03 09:17 PM

I have hazel eyes too!

And I like your poem - I think we all see our flaws more than our beauty. It's just how it is. So, don't be hard on yourself - I bet the others are right and you truly are beautiful.

Alison

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

7 posted 2009-09-16 03:25 PM

awww thanks u guys... really, i just sometimes wonder what would happen if i didn't have hazel eyes, u kno brown instead... that's what makes me think i wouldn't b as "pretty".....
But thnks 4 da comments anyway...

i appreciate it

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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