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precious pearls
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since 2009-07-24
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0 posted 2009-07-24 10:12 PM


A Beautiful and Unique Individual

When you are strong
And you know how to speak
I say you belong
And that you are unique

If you are beautiful
On the inside
And you provide
Girl, you sparkle!
Because you were meant to shine!

When you are your own best friend
And you still have it together
I say you are a fighter
And I have to commend
You, my sister
Because you are like no other!

I could stand here and lie
And say that you’re a housefly
But you are so much more
And I’m sure
That you will go far!
Because you are a star!

You’re a real woman
A phenomenal one rather.
Your face shines golden!
And you’re worth so much more for any bachelor!
You’re a true winner!

You should demand respect
Nobody should treat you wrong!
You should expect
Something from others
And be strong!

You are unique
An individual, if you will
A gorgeous antique!
Who knows her skill!

We are all beautiful
In our own special way.
We are the very symbol
Of the most elegant bouquet!


Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

© Copyright 2009 Kai Alexander - All Rights Reserved
Falling rain
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1 posted 2009-07-28 03:55 PM


This is my favorite of you by far. Great write. And it was consistent. which is a plus in my book. Hahaha.

-Zach

arabesque
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since 2009-07-26
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2 posted 2009-07-28 09:03 PM


I definitely have to agree with Falling Rain- this is my fave by you.  There's just something about rhyming poetry that speaks to me...anyway, this was amazing.  I especially liked the line about being your own best friend and still having it together.

Excellent write

Forever,
Arabesque<3

precious pearls
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since 2009-07-24
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NJ; United States
3 posted 2009-08-19 03:59 PM


Thanks guys... I actually wrote this for a school play... lol! But I really appreciate the comments, it means a lot because I hoped it would let other girls see that they are truly "a beautiful and unique individual"! Thanks again for the comments...

Yours,
   Kai

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