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A Daughter's Wish

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precious pearls
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0 posted 07-24-2009 10:10 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for precious pearls

A Daughterís Wish

How should you feel about a man
Who didnít want to have anything to do with you?
When can you confront a man
That was never responsible and didnít love you, too.

What could you say to a man
When you knew he never wanted you?
What would you talk about to a man
When he was the issue?

Too many tears shed over this worthless man
Is what some people say
You know heís a coward who ran
From his problems that day

Is he decent?
You wonder
Is he sorry?
You wonder

Your other side-
Do they know youíre alive?
You asked the silence
As you cried
Does it bother his conscience?
You ask the night
Or has the way to the goodness of his soul
The way to the light
Gone out too?
Is his heart the same as coal?

Why did he leave me?
You scream inside
Donít let him break you down that easy
Your heart replied
And thatís when you realize
That youíre always going to want to know
Why he didnít stay and watch you grow.

But now you have reached the conclusion
That he is the one who is broken
Not you
And as you realize this breakthrough
You still cannot help but wish
That you knew him too.


Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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1 posted 07-24-2009 11:44 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Definitely, a pearl of work, here, m'dear.

You definitely had a hard trail to travel,
yet, here you are.
Unbroken of spirit, for it soars;
unbroken of words, which now roar.

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Welcome!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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2 posted 07-25-2009 09:57 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This was very good. A lot of a emotion in this and it was really heartfelt. Keep it up. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.

-Zach
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3 posted 07-30-2009 01:59 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I'm a lil late, but...

Welcome to Pip!!!!

Nice poem!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

crosscountry83
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4 posted 07-30-2009 03:13 PM       View Profile for crosscountry83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crosscountry83

I liked it a lot.  Your new? I am too.  I really like how you explain how you feel in a way that is calming yet questioning and flows exceptionally. Keep it up!
precious pearls
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5 posted 08-19-2009 03:14 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

Thanks guys!!! I've been really busy, so I haven't been able to post anything or comment, but I appreciate the welcomes and comments!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

madelyn
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6 posted 09-04-2009 06:25 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

I have felt those feelings o' so many times... but realization is the first step...
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7 posted 09-10-2009 08:31 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

can relate to this well. great first post
Krysti
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8 posted 09-12-2009 01:35 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I like your style.

A
 
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