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NicoleRocker12367
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0 posted 2009-07-12 01:02 PM



Stuck between two people
Both are marvelous and sweet
Understanding and caring
I love them oh so much

One is a heartbreaker
Blond and dreamy
Sporty and moody
We have so much history

The other is a jock
Red haired and amazing
Popular and gentle
We have two years of history.

Which should I choose
Out of the two amazing boys
What do I do when I'm
Stuck between two

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1 posted 2009-07-12 01:54 PM


Oh you made me smile.  I had a memory of the days I was a cheerleader, and actually could pick.  Looking back on it now, dare I say, I would have not picked "the jock" because sometimes if something is too good, you tend to share it.  I don't share well.

You have a dilemma on your hands, but I am sure if you follow your inside intuition, you will pick the right one for you, at least for now.

I loved your poem.

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