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0 posted 07-10-2009 09:55 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This poem isn't that good. It doesn't rhyme which is a first for me. I really liked the picture although it didn't relate to the poem too much. Haha. Enjoy?


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Its hard sometimes
In those times of being insecure
To see the reflection of a broken child
Who's smile will be nevermore

The gloomy eyes stare back
Begging to be kind and fair
To hold out a helping hand
Protect his heart from being torn

For someone to patch the wounds
Put the pieces back and sew the seam
To wish for a brighter future
And hope love will find its way
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1 posted 07-11-2009 05:03 PM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Zach

I love this    

It must be one of my fave poems of yours.

Rob

PS  The pic was indeed great too.  It reminded me of something I wrote a while back.  I'll try and find it.

I found it.  Not sure if I can post it in this forum as I'm not a teen, so I'll post it in this reply.  It really fits with your mirror pic I think:

Light

I never knew the girl behind the polish
of pretty gold and mirrors.  Of course
I do not mean the one who was refused
nothing.  Who cried for the world
only when the filigree of silver
in her hair rubbed through to daylight;
or when, finally, gilt could not maintain
the suppleness and blushes of her skin.

No, I mean that bright creature I kneel before
this morning.  The one who leans close
enough to whisper: what else binds us
together but that coincidence
of light we call our selves?

Leanne <3
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2 posted 07-12-2009 09:59 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

man i really loved this poem
it was sad yet sweet at the same time
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3 posted 07-15-2009 11:53 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

I love this poem

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

something meaningful
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i really really like this. and i like how it doesnt rhyme. somehow that makes it even better.
 
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