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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2009-07-09 11:25 AM



This is it. I'm giving up.
There's no reason that I'm breathing.
The worlds crashing down,
And it seems I've lost all feeling.

I found that the walls don't break,
But my knuckles do.
A couple moments of rage,
Has left my hands red, black, and blue.

But I have lost everything.
From my friends to my dreams.
I've lost all motivation,
And the honor that it brings.

A hard cold curve,
On the freeway tonight;
Has stunned me awake,
And brought me to life.
Keep me here,
Safe from the light.

Thats in your eyes.
In your eyes.

© Copyright 2009 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2009-07-09 07:56 PM


Amazing again...
xx

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