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HauntingMelody
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0 posted 07-04-2009 06:52 PM       View Profile for HauntingMelody   Email HauntingMelody   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HauntingMelody

Hey, I've not written a single thing in a long while. This has no flow, meter, and poor rhyme. I just need to get back to my scribblings so I had to start somewhere. Thanks for reading


Painting perfumes my bedroom’s air,
slinging midnight across bristles.
Whispering violence without care,
wind crying my helpless whistles.
Striking keys with flittering hands,
closing eyes to scream, I realize,
breath halts as harmony disbands.
Choking in lies, the music dies.


© Copyright 2009 Michaela McHone - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-04-2009 08:58 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Michaela!!! ur back!

I like this, though I'm not quite sure I know what it's about.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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2 posted 07-05-2009 04:07 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Michaela?  As in GC?
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3 posted 07-05-2009 11:55 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Yes Moonbeam.

Forget your password or what hon? Glad to have you back anyway!

But the poem on the otherhand.. I'd have to agree with Christine. It wasn't my favorite from you. Sorry.

-Zach
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4 posted 07-30-2009 12:30 PM       View Profile for HauntingMelody   Email HauntingMelody   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HauntingMelody

I moved away from my mother and she has been getting online to try to discover something to have Daddy locked up or something. Daddy said to make different accounts for everything while I'm at work. He doesn't have internet. I probably won't be on here much until school starts back.

&& plzzz don't call this a poem. It's chicken scratch and nothing more.
 
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