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Teen Poetry #9

Mixed Up Music

HauntingMelody
New Member

since 2009-07-04

Posts 3
Tennessee

0 posted 2009-07-04 06:52 PM

Hey, I've not written a single thing in a long while. This has no flow, meter, and poor rhyme. I just need to get back to my scribblings so I had to start somewhere. Thanks for reading

Painting perfumes my bedroom’s air,
slinging midnight across bristles.
Whispering violence without care,
wind crying my helpless whistles.
Striking keys with flittering hands,
closing eyes to scream, I realize,
breath halts as harmony disbands.
Choking in lies, the music dies.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2009-07-04 08:58 PM

Michaela!!! ur back!

I like this, though I'm not quite sure I know what it's about.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

moonbeam

Member Elite

since 2005-12-24

Posts 2356

2 posted 2009-07-05 04:07 AM

Michaela? As in GC?

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2009-07-05 11:55 AM

Yes Moonbeam.

Forget your password or what hon?

Glad to have you back anyway!

But the poem on the otherhand.. I'd have to agree with Christine. It wasn't my favorite from you. Sorry.

-Zach

HauntingMelody
New Member

since 2009-07-04

Posts 3
Tennessee

4 posted 2009-07-30 12:30 PM

I moved away from my mother and she has been getting online to try to discover something to have Daddy locked up or something. Daddy said to make different accounts for everything while I'm at work. He doesn't have internet. I probably won't be on here much until school starts back.

&& plzzz don't call this a poem. It's chicken scratch and nothing more.

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