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courtneysmiles
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0 posted 07-02-2009 11:47 PM       View Profile for courtneysmiles   Email courtneysmiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for courtneysmiles


It was your hand that pulled me out of the darkness.
Your words that left me breathless.
I was once a girl with no name.
You showed and said I was yours to claim.


You've forever changed me,
But is it me they really see,
or the person you've created me to be?
Am I held captive or am I free?

I don't think I should be with you.
Look what all of this has come to.
You don't love me, you love her.
And it's that me I need to discover.

Courtney Hetrick

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priyanka
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since 06-15-2009
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1 posted 07-03-2009 06:40 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

now this was really good...precise and to the point...so since when have you been writing poetry? i really felt that way many times...im tryin so hard to find myself that sort of thing..well done
precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
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2 posted 07-24-2009 10:04 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

It was sooo... innocent, yet it was a strong poem.. because firs it sounds like you were gonna b heartbroken over the guy, but at the end, you said that you need to find yourself.... that right there represents true strength in my opinion... Most people want to jus give up and let the pain consume them, but you took a step back and really looked at your life and said, i need to find myself.... Absoulutely WONDERFUL poem, loved it!!!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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