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Running To Stand Still (Different Style Of Writing!)

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RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
Posts 832
Australia


0 posted 07-02-2009 11:33 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine

This is it..
Enough, I'm DONE
This war is killing me..

Pulled from two directions
It hurts so much to breathe
Why won't you just listen...


I try and tell you
But the words just stay in
It's like i'm screaming out silence

How bout i just stop breathing
Everything's prettier when your dead
Will you miss when i'm gone..

This silence is me broken
Empty drawers and clean sheets
I'll see you in another life

___

this poem is up the creek and back
But give me credit for trying
I'd pull the trigger but i don't have the guts
And i don't feel like dying

But maybe one day you'll understand
Until then i'm all but done
Don't call, don't write, don't find me
This war is already won

The busted rhyme is my goodbye
to a life i wished i didn't live
I'm running to stand still again
But you aren't comming with
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shattered-smiles
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since 01-20-2008
Posts 248
inside the shadows


1 posted 07-03-2009 11:05 AM       View Profile for shattered-smiles   Email shattered-smiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shattered-smiles

Jess, this is beautiful!  I love it, and even though I may not understand how you're feeling, I can definately relate to it.  Hang in there sweetie, I love you!

my knuckles have turned to white, there's no turning back tonight ----- kiss me one last time [shut your eyes]

Leanne <3
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since 08-25-2007
Posts 217
N.S.W, Australia


2 posted 07-06-2009 10:42 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

i absolutely loved reading this poem!
i think the flow and rhythm complimented the subject perfectly.
RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
Posts 832
Australia


3 posted 07-08-2009 12:22 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Thanks Guys....


MWAHS!
HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
Posts 137
New Jersey


4 posted 07-08-2009 09:02 AM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HersheyKiss

JESSSSS how are you??? How's the baby?

I loved the poem it was good as usual. Stay strong
-Dani
Clockwork_Orange
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since 03-23-2007
Posts 623
Space Camp, IN


5 posted 07-09-2009 10:58 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

well. it looks like i might be back. if you guys like me i might stick around. ....alots changed jess
Clockwork_Orange
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since 03-23-2007
Posts 623
Space Camp, IN


6 posted 07-09-2009 11:05 AM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

its amazing as always. you never do let me down. i can tell you now experiment with a lot of styles of writing that have helped you progress throughout your years of practice.  You still have the same old charm as well, with strong emotion and great central ideas; your work comes alive.
                                                                 CO

~ you cant run from yourself ~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 01-20-2008
Posts 887
Neverland


7 posted 08-01-2009 06:07 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Hey Jess. I've missed you!
great write as always.

lots of hugs,

  Em.♥

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

 
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