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Smoke clouding over you

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The smoke fill your lungs
as you pass it around
The smoke creating a wall
over the room
The smoke clouding
over your eyes as you look at me

Your saying your sorry
But i will never belive it
if you where sorry you'd quiet
if you loved me you'd stop
whats slowly killing you
is equaly killing me

Your teeth turn yellow
Your eyes turn red
Your lungs turn to dust
and Daddy..
Your slowly fading away

What if your gone
when i'm walking down the isle
on my perfect night
When i look the best i could

What if your not there
to take my hand for the ending dance
father daughter
what if your not there
to give me to my prince
what if your not there daddy
to help me up when i crash
Daddy what if your not there
to see my babies grow..

*Tears of pain & hurt*

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