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Teen Poetry #9

There's No Need To Cry

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-06-27 09:45 AM

This is like the lamest poem I've ever written but I'm in writers block and I needed to write something. So here goes nothing.
Okay, I can catch a hint.
The silence wasn't bad at first
But now its driving me crazed
Please lets try to converse

Your voice is sweet
But in its rage is rigid
Like glass it cuts my heart
I'm sorry babe how I acted

Tell me where I went wrong
Because I can see it in your eyes
Don't cry my love. I'll try better
There's no need to cry

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-06-27 11:54 AM

the sentiments are sweet Zach...

for me, I would like to see it a little longer, like maybe another stanza..?

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