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0 posted 2009-06-18 11:07 PM



when i entered this dorm
i was put in the number 1 room
in front of room number 2
where there's Kristina Patino.

she walked in the hallway
she then asked me right away
if i wanna buy a foam, that's one evening
and our story begins.

months passed away, we shared the same study place
and we call it "office"
where sometimes we had OJTs
'coz they couldn't find any space.

you're such an angel sent from above
a blessing worth to be kept and be loved
i thanked God for bringing me here
and for crossing our paths, ate dear.

every night to the Lord i pray
that he will bless our friendship in every way
so let's keep the fire burning
and make sure it won't reach the ending.

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1 posted 2009-06-19 01:32 PM


Perhaps a little prosey, but what's "foam"? and what did you mean by "ate dear"?
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2 posted 2009-06-19 09:08 PM


i know..this is what we call "easy writing" LOL
ate dear means sister dear but since she's not my biological sister i don't use sister just 'ate' as a sign of respect..

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