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A song never to be sung

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priyanka
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0 posted 06-18-2009 07:53 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for priyanka



I'll tell you again there is nothing wrong
but if you look into my eyes-you would know I was trying to be strong
I say I've got over, I say I'm all done
But let me tell you it has just begun
Never did it start but it was always there
Before I could realise, i could no longer bear
The pain to lose you
I wondered if it could ever be true?
I fell in a trap
Even though i always said it was all crap
It's all around me
It's all inside me
I can never forget it all
Even if I tried real hard
The time I spent with you-
Its become a part of me
Best said is when it remains unsaid
But why have you ruined my life?
It's just a baby-things had just begun
You made me dream of a life with you like a song written never to be sung.
When I say baby I mean my life...I had just started living
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precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
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1 posted 09-27-2009 06:53 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

Wow!!! It was beautiful! It really expressed ur feelings and everything! Great poem, made me wanna cry for you.....

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

priyanka
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2 posted 10-04-2009 04:56 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

thank you again!
its really nice of you to comment...
Penwing
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since 07-27-2009
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3 posted 10-05-2009 11:51 PM       View Profile for Penwing   Email Penwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Penwing

Wow.....First you are a great writer....but i almost cried while reading this because you basicy described what i am going through with my girlfriend right now....i left her...and realized that i could not do without her and she gracefully gave me another chance

       sorry for the rant,
            great write,
              ,Alex
priyanka
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4 posted 10-06-2009 11:04 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

I'm glad it worked out for you...
And thank you for the compliments...
Hearing it from such great writers is icing on the cake...
hafrock
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since 10-10-2009
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5 posted 10-10-2009 03:52 PM       View Profile for hafrock   Email hafrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hafrock

Reminds me of the terrible times my roommate is going through..its though as if he's tellin me his woes..gr8 piece of a writing.k.i.u
priyanka
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6 posted 10-10-2009 04:32 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Thank you hafrock,
Hope you're room mate's doing fine...
priyanka
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7 posted 10-10-2009 05:03 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

priyanka
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8 posted 10-03-2011 06:38 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

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