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This Life I'm Living Isn't Mine

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nehematala
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0 posted 06-18-2009 12:09 AM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nehematala

From 6:30 am to 11 pm
This life I'm living
Isn't mine
When do I get to be me
I'm not you
I can't do everything
So why do you expect me to?
This pressure I feel
It's unrealistic
When do I get to be me?
I'm not perfect
Don't expect me to be
Every minute planed
Every hour written up
All my time spent
What about me?
When do I get to be me?
This life I'm living
Isn't mine

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

© Copyright 2009 Michelle Lynn Barclay - All Rights Reserved
priyanka
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1 posted 06-18-2009 08:22 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

wow! this is good but if you don't mind me asking is it your sister your speaking about?I understand ... that pain and suffering and then to feel restricted...
nehematala
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2 posted 06-18-2009 03:04 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

The poem is about the restrictions my sister set for me

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

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