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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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Golden Raindrop

I saw the break of dawn today
Amid the cloud filled sky
I stopped to stare and look at it
The brightness hurt my eyes

And a piece of sun came floating
Like a glowing glassy stone
It dripped down yellow raindrops
And the raindrops fell alone

But I and I alone did go
And pick one for mankind
A gentle golden raindrop
Was in my hand and mine

But they won’t let me keep
My golden happy drop
They took it from my grasp
And then my heart did stop

And from the lack of rain drop
I died that very day
I wonder why it killed me
When the raindrop went away . . .

"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

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nehematala
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1 posted 06-17-2009 11:43 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

wow I love this

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 06-18-2009 10:25 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Thanks, it wasfun to write.

-Kate

"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 06-18-2009 02:41 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Very nice indeed! That one gave me shivers and left me smiling!!

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This is very beautiful! I love it!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

LittleWillow
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5 posted 06-19-2009 02:22 PM       View Profile for LittleWillow   Email LittleWillow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleWillow

I love it!
love the title.
the rhythm.
the words.
the ending.
WKD!


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6 posted 06-20-2009 10:40 AM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

your words have left an imprint on my mind, and definitely made me smile. this is a beautiful piece of work! keep writing!!
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