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Earl Robertson
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0 posted 06-17-2009 01:32 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Earl Robertson

Red rose
Fly with me
Cliff jump
From the man

Romeo
Save Juliet
Gingerbread
Lure slowly

Still red rose
Speak to me
Running cliff
Walk with me

Itís in that
Moment
When you know
You can jump

The gun is loaded
The poison is drunk
The train is racing now
Like a red ribbon flying

The sun is setting now
On two kids in a candy house
Tip your cards and play the game
Witches brew and whispered name

Juliet
Save Romeo
For the gold
Dawn is breaking

Ancient scroll
Speak for them
Leave me lie
Never flee

Red Rose
Fly with me
Ginger door
Be silk for me

My melancholy is purely my own

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1 posted 06-17-2009 02:10 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

FRANK!!! I missed you!! lol I loved this very opposite of cliche I think! which is good because its different and i loved it!
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2 posted 06-17-2009 08:48 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

To be honest I didn't understand a bit of this. Maybe I need a cup of coffee first before reading due to the fact I just woke up. lol
I'll read it again later and see if it made a difference.

But I did like the wording you put in this.
-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 06-17-2009 12:32 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Zach, Zach, Zach
expecting to understand my poetry...
Mine!!
how foolish...

My melancholy is purely my own

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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4 posted 06-17-2009 02:52 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that much!


-Kate

"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

nehematala
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5 posted 06-17-2009 11:42 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is amazing

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

freeand2sexy
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6 posted 06-18-2009 07:23 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

This is interesting!

Which translates to-

"I have no clue what this poem means, but I like it!"

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

Earl Robertson
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7 posted 06-18-2009 08:39 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Thanks guys!

Surely someone will take a stab at the meaning...

To fly is to fall and miss the sidewalk
-Douglas Adams

LittleWillow
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8 posted 06-19-2009 02:20 PM       View Profile for LittleWillow   Email LittleWillow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleWillow

This is great!
Love the words you used!

FAB!

xx
kindredspirit
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9 posted 06-20-2009 10:53 AM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

In an attempt to decipher your symbolism, it seems as if you wrote of taking a chance at trust, or at love.
I'm going to be sitting up tonight thinking of your words, of this poem. You write in a seductive manner, pulling me in. I couldn't stop reading if I tried.. Not that i would want to.
Earl Robertson
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10 posted 06-21-2009 05:35 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

HAHA

Spirit's almost got it!!
What can you guys do with that?!?!

To fly is to fall and miss the sidewalk
-Douglas Adams

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