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Love_Skull
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0 posted 06-16-2009 07:32 PM       View Profile for Love_Skull   Email Love_Skull   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Love_Skull

C H A N G E S
something bound to happen
P A I N
something you are bound to endure
S A C R I F I C E
something you are willing to do
D O U B T
something bound to cross your mind

L O V E
something you run into head first
H O P E
something you are willing to let happen
J O Y
something that comes and ends
P E A C E
something not fond of many people

O P P O S I T E S
something that easily attracts
P R O M I S E S
something bound to be broken
T E A R S
something that will eventually fall unwillingly from your eyes
F I G H T S
something easily one, but easily lost

D R E A M S
something that lies inside your head, carved into a thought
M E M O R I E S
something that brings us both joy and heartache
H A P P I N E S S
something that can pass by in a mere second or last for hours

S O R R O W
something you cant live without
L O S S
something of and experience that will come
F E A R
something that everyone experiences
P I E C E S
something that my life is made up of

D I F F E R E N T
something with many meanings
N O R M A L
something no person in this world is
W O R T H L E S S
something that you may think you are, but arent
U N I Q U E
something every one is; no one can change who you are but you


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This is good. i know you didn't encourage critics but may I say one thing? I think that if you took the "something"s out it would flow a lot easier

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

 
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