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I can't seem to take my eye off
That sparkle in your eye
A angelic light maybe?
Or a darker lie?

I can't tell whats the truth
And whats hidden behind a lie
But this artificial happiness
Is giving me such a high

Are you taking me to Heaven
Just to drop me down the line?
You tell me I'm beautiful
Am I fooled by your divine?  

I see your angel face
Perfect with your smile
Should I back out now?
Or just stay for a while?

Am I falling for an angel?
Or a demon down in Hell?
Will I be happy in life?
Or in pain will I dwell?

Your just a heart breaker
And your using me deep inside
Am I falling for Dr. Jekyll
Just to see his evil Hyde?  
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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AMAZING POEM!!! I love this Zach honey!!!
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2 posted 06-16-2009 08:56 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is really good its so true

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

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HO boy this guy's improved!!!!

This was EXCELLENT!!!
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4 posted 06-17-2009 02:20 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thank you.

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

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Very nice, Zach!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

 
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