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Teen Poetry #9

Angelic Demons

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-06-16 04:45 PM

I can't seem to take my eye off
That sparkle in your eye
A angelic light maybe?
Or a darker lie?

I can't tell whats the truth
And whats hidden behind a lie
But this artificial happiness
Is giving me such a high

Are you taking me to Heaven
Just to drop me down the line?
You tell me I'm beautiful
Am I fooled by your divine?

I see your angel face
Perfect with your smile
Should I back out now?
Or just stay for a while?

Am I falling for an angel?
Or a demon down in Hell?
Will I be happy in life?
Or in pain will I dwell?

Your just a heart breaker
And your using me deep inside
Am I falling for Dr. Jekyll
Just to see his evil Hyde?

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2009-06-16 06:59 PM

AMAZING POEM!!! I love this Zach honey!!!

nehematala
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since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

2 posted 2009-06-16 08:56 PM

This is really good its so true

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2009-06-17 01:31 AM

HO boy this guy's improved!!!!

This was EXCELLENT!!!

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2009-06-17 02:20 PM

Thank you.

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

5 posted 2009-06-18 07:16 PM

Very nice, Zach!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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