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hunnie_girl
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Things were always cheery
when I was only five
everyone loved eachother
we were happy to be alive

but then one year was added
I saw things I didn't understand
daddy just hit mommy
I ran reaching for his hand

I tried to stop my daddy
I was crying and he got mad
I cant really remember much
but I know my mum was hurt real bad

we didnt go to the doctor's
but we walked a long while
leaving and then going back
911 set on speed dial

i never understood
why my daddy got so mad
mommy said it was caused
by all the alcohol he had

he always said sorry
to my mum the next day
I think thats the real reason
he always got her to stay

then one day she found the strength
to get up and start brand new
leaving behind bad memories
she found the right thng to do
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Wow this is really touching. Its an amazing poem.

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

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Great poem hon!!! Very touching and I can relate pretty well.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

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all my hairs are standing on end, good jobs hunnie. I missed yoU!!!!!!!!! Glad to have you and your sweet nature back.

-Kate

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"I'm complicated."

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4 posted 06-17-2009 07:13 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

*shudder*

Wow Hunnie, I second Kate's remarks...

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i loved it
 
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