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LittleWillow
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0 posted 06-15-2009 12:17 PM       View Profile for LittleWillow   Email LittleWillow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleWillow

To my Mother.
These words i write for you.
These words i will also promise you.
For all the times, you held my hand.
For all the times, you'd understand.
These are the times i remember you most.
Everytime i would cry, for everytime i told a sneaky white lie.
You always knew.
You taught me how.
You showed me how to love and cherish.
& when i was down, you were always there.
You never lied to me, or said you didnt care.
& when i would cry you would hold me close.
You'd tell me it was my personality you loved the most.
But the one thing i truely hold onto.
Is you gave me a chance, and this i am grateful.
You taught me all you knew so i could grow.

& growing into the woman i am today, i feel i am ever so lucky to have you this way.
You've never failed or given up.

And when i am all alone, it will feel so wierd.
But i promised myself i would not cry.
For i will always have you, i know this is true.
You'll always be standing beside, seeing me through.

So i wont cry any tears and think of our memories.
I wont shed any sorrow for not having you with me.
Dear Mother.
I love you. Always.


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1 posted 06-17-2009 01:01 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

awee hon i loved this it remeinds me very much of my mother
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2 posted 06-17-2009 01:30 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Very nice indeed!
Leanne <3
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3 posted 06-17-2009 08:47 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

This is such a sweet poem, great write.
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4 posted 06-17-2009 08:51 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I think this is beautiful. Made me think of my Mum too. Great job!

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

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5 posted 06-17-2009 11:48 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This poem is very touching. It helped me to remember  that I will always have my mom even though she can't physically be here with me.

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

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6 posted 06-19-2009 02:15 PM       View Profile for LittleWillow   Email LittleWillow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleWillow

Thanks guys!
Glad you liked it.. =]

xx
 
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