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I love living in my dreams...i feel alive...wish it were all true...my dreams

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priyanka
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0 posted 06-15-2009 11:46 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for priyanka

Dreams
The times in our heart
where things will remain the same,
we'll unravel our feelings and
distance will complete the change.
Abrupt is the beginning, abrupt is the end,
but let us hope to meet where time will never end
Where there is nothing beyond life, just nothing like death.
We will be immortal and then things will just begin.
A whole new world with beautiful minds,
where we'll stay together and live forever.
Where dreams will be complete and be fullfilled,
there will be nothing much left but never will time be still.
Where life will be mad eand where thoughts come true-
that is my world where dreams come true.
Beyond the perception of human mind,
beyond the thoughts we can ever find.
That is my world where no is blind,
where you can ask and find.
That is my world where we live life anew
That is my world where dreams come true...
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1 posted 06-15-2009 12:45 PM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Welcome to PiP, nice opening poem.
priyanka
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2 posted 06-16-2009 12:05 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

thank you
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Enjoyed this very much. Welcome to Passions!

Please check your email for a
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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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4 posted 09-27-2009 06:57 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

OMG it was soooooo pretty!!!! The way you described it..... it just had the sense of making me feel calm.... beautiful! absolutley wonderful!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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5 posted 10-04-2009 04:55 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

thank you kai...
you are lovely too...
the idea you came up with for falling rain's 3rd stanza is too good...
really hope you take part in contests
you've got really good talent...
 
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