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The Empty Diary

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HersheyKiss
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0 posted 06-11-2009 03:29 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss


The Empty Diary:
An ordinary diary,
Complete with a lock and key,
But there's no use in reading it,
It's empty as can be.

Not one single entry,
It's blank on every page,
It just rests on the shelf,
Collecting dust with age.

Not one single word,
The pages are all white,
Not one speck of ink,
For there is nothing good to write.

All the memories are bad,
And stuck within her head,
So she won't fill the diary,
Until there's happiness instead.

The diary remains empty,
Happy memories are not made,
The bad memories are not recorded,
But they certainly do not fade.

Just a simple diary,
Complete with lock and key,
Filled with empty pages,
The diary of me.
© Copyright 2009 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-11-2009 07:01 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Nice imagery.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

nehematala
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2 posted 06-12-2009 12:57 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is really good. I love it!

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 06-18-2009 07:05 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

It flows real nice.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

meganne_77
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4 posted 06-20-2009 05:03 PM       View Profile for meganne_77   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for meganne_77

i really liked this poem, it has a good flow and nice rhythm.

Barbie

kindredspirit
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5 posted 06-20-2009 06:34 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

this was well expressed and nicely written.
faeriemythc
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6 posted 06-27-2009 06:27 PM       View Profile for faeriemythc   Email faeriemythc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for faeriemythc

Well written.
courtneysmiles
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7 posted 07-03-2009 07:36 PM       View Profile for courtneysmiles   Email courtneysmiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for courtneysmiles

This was really good.(:
I liked it.
It actually made a ton of sense.

Courtney Hetrick

HeliaHeart
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8 posted 07-04-2009 10:34 PM       View Profile for HeliaHeart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HeliaHeart

Intriging... I myself love diaries and journals. The imagery is vivid. I love it!

~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

precious pearls
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9 posted 08-19-2009 05:00 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

Wow, it was so deep, the depth of the poem just spoke to me in the most beautiful and sad way... Loved it

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

 
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