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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 06-09-2009 09:37 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed


From the Watery World

I missed you, you know
In the dark of the night
When I wake up from nightmares
That leave my sweat cold

I imagine your arms
So strong and secure
Wrapped around my body
-For a moment, I'm safe

I look to the northwest
Where I know you are
Thinking of me as I'm thinking of you
Watching and waiting the same as I do

The pain is been lessened
As I look at your face
So full of your love
In my tattered used wallet

I miss you, you know
As I sit here alone
Watching the sun color
My watery world

"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

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1 posted 06-09-2009 12:11 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Awww! This was soo sweet! I love it.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

freeand2sexy
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2 posted 06-18-2009 06:59 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I like this!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

UNTAMEDelegance
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3 posted 06-27-2009 12:41 AM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

I love it! It's sweet, gentle and, heartwarming. Great write!=^.^=
                      ~UNTAMEDelegance
Earl Robertson
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4 posted 06-28-2009 09:23 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Awww Kate!! This was awesome!
Miss you, love you!!!

To fly is to fall and miss the sidewalk
-Douglas Adams

Clockwork_Orange
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5 posted 07-09-2009 09:23 PM       View Profile for Clockwork_Orange   Email Clockwork_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clockwork_Orange's Home Page   View IP for Clockwork_Orange

well. you certainly have captured my attention as per usual.  great work,
         expecting more soon,
                                              CO
nehematala
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6 posted 07-15-2009 11:56 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is such a good poem

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

 
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