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0 posted 06-06-2009 10:54 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kindredspirit

passions kindled inside out
empty kisses invite doubt
lose to win, the game is on
tangled sheets and legs till dawn
touch makes love, makes war inside
exposed to gain control in lies
flesh to flesh craves shallow lust
shadows in her eyes scream lust
a victim snared by apathy
the gavel falls, no sympathy
"friends" cast judgment, lips accuse
just keep in mind, it could be you.

[This message has been edited by kindredspirit (06-08-2009 04:14 PM).]

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1 posted 06-08-2009 02:29 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This was pretty good. I like it. I really liked the beginning few lines. Keep up the good work.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

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Falling Rain, Thankyou! I will do my best.
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3 posted 06-09-2009 11:48 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

i miswrote this.

edit:
"flesh to flesh craves shallow trust"

thankyou.
lol
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4 posted 07-01-2009 09:08 AM       View Profile for rockangel_gv   Email rockangel_gv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rockangel_gv

I love it!
 
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