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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
You stole my heart with a single dart Cupid you played for a fool being laid Purity asunder by a single blunder There goes my hand |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think that this poem portrays what can happen when your heart overturns your head. I of course am no longer a teen,  but can sure remember well those hormones fighting with my common sense. Well done in showing what negative feelings are awakened when one makes a quick decision in a moment of passion. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Mysteria- Thank you for commenting. I'm not sure I had even looked at it in that light, for this was more of... an exercise of humorous intent. It was nice to hear your thoughts, and again thank you for taking the time to comment. |
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