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You stole my heart
with a single dart
Cupid you played
for a fool being laid

Purity asunder
by a single blunder

There goes my hand
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1 posted 06-06-2009 01:37 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I think that this poem portrays what can happen when your heart overturns your head.  I of course am no longer a teen, but can sure remember well those hormones fighting with my common sense.  Well done in showing what negative feelings are awakened when one makes a quick decision in a moment of passion.
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Mysteria- Thank you for commenting. I'm not sure I had even looked at it in that light, for this was more of... an exercise of  humorous intent. It was nice to hear your thoughts, and again thank you for taking the time to comment.
 
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