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Dreamy Reality

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the_inner_me11
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0 posted 06-04-2009 06:49 PM       View Profile for the_inner_me11   Email the_inner_me11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_inner_me11

This is my first post.. ever. Tell me what you think.


In my dreams your mine to hold,

I don't have to stand out from the crowd or be bold.

Your my sweetie, my baby, my lovely love

I don't have to compete with anyone, I'm always put above.

Your with me when I feel alone and scared,

I don't have to be brave and do everything I'm dared.

But in reality your not mine to claim,

I have to wait in line for you to say my name.

Your not my boo, my sugar, the love of my life

I have to wait like your someone else's wife.

Your not there when I cry and lie by myself,

I have to suffer like a dusty forgotten book on a shelf.

If I lived in my dreams life would be great,

But I live in reality where the farthest thing from kind is my fate.


[This message has been edited by the_inner_me11 (06-04-2009 09:15 PM).]

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1 posted 06-05-2009 04:12 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here .   I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses.  Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together.  (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

All the best.

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nehematala
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2 posted 06-18-2009 12:34 AM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is really good

If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either.

Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
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3 posted 06-20-2009 09:00 PM       View Profile for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Email Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk

It touched my heart.
I started crying keep on writing.

We are all unique  in Jesus' eyes.

the_inner_me11
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4 posted 06-20-2009 10:52 PM       View Profile for the_inner_me11   Email the_inner_me11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_inner_me11

Thank youso much. I wasnt really sure how it would go over but im very happy you liked it.
 
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