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HersheyKiss
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0 posted 06-03-2009 08:14 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss

Danielle Lies:

When Dani wakes up every morning,
She wipes the tears from her eyes,
By the time she leaves her bedroom she is smiling,
As she eats her breakfast Dani lies.

She lies to her father,
And to strangers in the street,
She'll lie to everyone she knows,
And everyone she's yet to meet.

When Dani hangs out with her friends,
She keeps the tears locked inside,
By the time she gets back home,
No-one knows Dani's lied.

She lies to her father,
And to strangers in the street,
She'll lie to everyone she knows,
And everyone she's yet to meet.

When Dani goes about her day,
She lies with every breath,
By the time she's in her bed,
She honestly welcomes death.


When Dani falls asleep,
She faces the truth of every lie,
By the time she wakes again,
Tears of truth are in her eyes.
© Copyright 2009 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Leanne <3
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1 posted 06-03-2009 10:05 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

something i think everyone goes through at some point in there life
i really enjoyed reading this one

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2 posted 06-04-2009 12:54 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This is really really good. Sad but good

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

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3 posted 08-19-2009 04:57 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

Beautiful, absoulutely heart-wrenching poem!
 
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