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He caught her eye
As she danced with her friends
Swaying her hips
to the rhythm
the beat
the chaos of the bodies
that bled her dry

intrigued from the start
he fixed his gaze on her
And she lured him in
With her eyes
her lips
her perfect tousled hair
That could break his heart

Hands guiding up her thighs
With a cheeky little laugh
Seducing him with temptation
The dress
The heels
The jewels of the wealthy
that fool all the guys

Then without fret
He got up from his seat
And started walking her way
He walked
And walked
And kept on walking
Till he had passed her

Then

He turned back to her and said
You know you may just be

The loneliest girl Ive ever met.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Thomas Har

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Awww.. I liked it all till the ending. Sorta sad at the end but still good. Great to have you back.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

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wow, this is amazing! i applaud you.
 
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