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Zaineb
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The dark night after the bright morning


We are in middle in December
And snow is coming soon
The first snow of the year
But no one seems to care
Because after bright morning
There is a dark night

With a small please, there is a big sorrow
And so is it the other way round
The please donít count
As long as the sorrow is near
Because after the bright morning
There is a dark night

Too busy to notice the white snow
We only see the dark around
Why do we forget please?
Why donít we see other things
then the dark night in sight
The white snow is outside
It only comes ones in a year.
I ask now
Why do we only think about the dark night
After the bright morning
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1 posted 05-25-2009 02:41 PM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

This is nicely written. Maybe you should think about submitting it here:

http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2009/may/19/john-siddique-poetry-workshop
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Hmm good metaphoric. I like it.

-Zach  

I love my crayons. :D lol

 
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