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Teen Poetry #9
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Zaineb
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0 posted 2009-05-25 10:38 AM


Time

There is more to see
There is more to do
The time wouldn’t stop
We have to run with
We will fall but only so we can rise again
It will hurt but never repeat a mistake

Where we will fall
Someone else will rise
Where our tear will drop
A new life will grow
The happiness is always around
You was too sweet once
Don’t be it again

When you smile
Don’t cry inside
Don’t think too much about the lost
There is more to loose
But yet more to find
There will always be sorrow
But yet there will be happiness
You fall once and maybe twice
Stand up and run again.
Learn from your mistake
And don’t look behind
There is more to see and do
So go ahead.

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1 posted 2009-05-25 11:35 AM


Great advice - put the past behind you and always keep moving on!
Zaineb
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2 posted 2009-05-25 11:40 AM


Thank you
nehematala
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3 posted 2009-05-29 01:58 PM


This poem is amazing!!!!!!!! So true

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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