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My first (:

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Zaineb
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since 05-22-2009
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0 posted 05-22-2009 10:14 AM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

This is my first on this site, i hope you like please tell me how i can do it better

Alone

Whenever I felt alone
Whenever I wanted to cry
No one came to comfort me
Iím used to be alone
And donít change it now
I donít need comfort
Donít change the good time
Let them be
Stop trying to make it all better
Because itís not working
Iím all alone, but Iím happy
I am alone
And donít change it.

Whenever I want to cry
Whenever I miss the good time
You try to help me out
But just leave me alone
I know you are trying to help
But itís not working
The good times have gone
Just because you wanted them better
When things are going good
Learn to enjoy
Donít try to change
When the times not right
I am alone
And I donít need help
I am alone
And now I donít even have the good times

Whenever I feel sad
And miss the good times
I start to think about how much better I was alone
When I see what you have done to me
I wish that I have no friends
I donít want to be alone
I need to be alone
I need to be myself and stop worrying about you
Itís all was good
But you wished for more
Learn to enjoy
Or get out of my life
Itís hard to believe what you have done to me
Ií sick of others and their wishes
Now I want to be alone
And donít you dare to change that.

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1 posted 05-22-2009 11:25 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here .   I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses.  Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together.  (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

All the best.

Rob - Moderator/Passions in Poetry
freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


2 posted 05-22-2009 08:03 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Welcome to Pip!!!

Nice write!

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

Zaineb
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since 05-22-2009
Posts 27
Denmark


3 posted 05-23-2009 03:06 AM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

thank you
nehematala
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since 05-21-2009
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4 posted 05-31-2009 03:41 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

good poem

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

 
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