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nehematala
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since 05-21-2009
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0 posted 05-21-2009 04:49 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nehematala


Why no one liked me
I did not understand
I got laughed at and made fun of
Everything I did, everything I said
Was used to hurt me
They were hurting me
I tried to cover up my pain
Behind the mask
But the pain and torture continued
I cried myself to sleep at night
I did not want to go to school
I was an easy target
And I didn't know why
Then the day came
When my mask covered up the pain
And the torture stopped
I was left completely alone
But the pain never went away
And the scar still remains


If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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Zaineb
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since 05-22-2009
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Denmark


1 posted 05-22-2009 10:19 AM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

This is one of the best poems on this topic, and it is soo true, you would never forget things like this, and the pain and anger of it never stop either.
Twi
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since 05-21-2009
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the Underworld


2 posted 05-26-2009 01:36 PM       View Profile for Twi   Email Twi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twi

I applaud you for your inspiring work.
But on a more relaxed note..
I want to see more of your work, I am very impressed. I want to see more!!!!
nehematala
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3 posted 05-29-2009 06:23 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

Zaineb~ Thanks the reason it comes out like that is because i write from experience

Twi~ Thank you for taking the time to comment.

Its good to hear when my poems are liked

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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