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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
Why no one liked me I did not understand I got laughed at and made fun of Everything I did, everything I said Was used to hurt me They were hurting me I tried to cover up my pain Behind the mask But the pain and torture continued I cried myself to sleep at night I did not want to go to school I was an easy target And I didn't know why Then the day came When my mask covered up the pain And the torture stopped I was left completely alone But the pain never went away And the scar still remains If you don't like something, |
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Zaineb Junior Member
since 2009-05-22
Posts 27Denmark |
This is one of the best poems on this topic, and it is soo true, you would never forget things like this, and the pain and anger of it never stop either. |
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Twi Junior Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 22the Underworld |
I applaud you for your inspiring work.  But on a more relaxed note.. I want to see more of your work, I am very impressed. I want to see more!!!!  |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
Zaineb~ Thanks the reason it comes out like that is because i write from experience Twi~ Thank you for taking the time to comment. Its good to hear when my poems are liked If you don't like something, |
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