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My Super Hero

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nehematala
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0 posted 05-21-2009 04:28 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nehematala


I saw your picture
In a frame
Smiling through
The pain
Your love and faith
Forever enduring
Your strength
Through it all
You didn't have
To fight this battle
You knew the fate
To come
You could have
Let it overcome
Without the fight
Yet you still
Hung on
Your love for others
So strong
You didn't want
Them to hurt
So you took the pain
And gave out smiles
Your heart
Overflowing with love
You may have lost
The battle against ALS
But yours the victory to keep
Your in heaven
And even though your gone now
Mamma you'll always be
My super hero

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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1 posted 05-22-2009 05:33 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here .   I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses.  Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together.  (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

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Zaineb
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2 posted 05-22-2009 10:23 AM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

This is soo good, the pain in this is soo strong, and I really enjoy to read it.
Rosie_Orange
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3 posted 05-22-2009 03:18 PM       View Profile for Rosie_Orange   Email Rosie_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosie_Orange

well done for your first poem! i really liked it! keep it up
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 05-22-2009 08:07 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Welcome to Pip!!!

Nice first post!

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

nehematala
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5 posted 05-29-2009 06:26 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

Thank you I wrote this one right after my mom died and i wright best when I am angry or upset, my feeling come through a lot easier.

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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