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I met you in a story

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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
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since 05-03-2009
Posts 31
Terrell,Texas


0 posted 05-18-2009 09:08 PM       View Profile for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Email Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk


I met you in a story,
Upon an autumn's eve,
We built a treetop hideout,
Among the russet trees.


I met you in a story,
Upon a snowy morn,
We wreathed a deer in holly,
And feed him sweet white corn.


I met you in a story,
Upon a summer's night,
We took your sloop exploring,
Through seas of silver light.


I met you in a story,
Upon a rainy day,
We rode on armored stallions,
Into the battle fray.


I met you in a story
And friend I do believe
I'll met you in that treetop hideout
Another autumn's eve.

We are all unique  in Jesus' eyes.

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Kalysta
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since 04-02-2009
Posts 41
Ohio


1 posted 05-18-2009 09:16 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

Really good write. It is different than what you normally write, I keep an eye out for your writing. I particulary like it. Anyways great job. I like it a lot!!!

~Kalysta~

~Kalysta~

freeand2sexy
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 703
CA, USA


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Very good!!! I think this is your best so far.

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

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