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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 05-16-2009 12:21 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


Soft and silent footsteps,
imprinted in the snow.
Just a memory of the night,
as the moon shines through clouds.

Dark, cold snowfall,
threatening to kill.
Roaring wind penetrating the frozen rain,
taking down the night.

Frozen in captivity,
mesmerized by the dark.
She'll waste her time remembering,
that snowfall which brought her back to the end.

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

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Kalysta
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1 posted 05-16-2009 01:27 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

Hey i really like this. Really good write! I enjoyed reading it.
~Kalysta~

~Kalysta~

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2 posted 05-16-2009 04:20 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow! Great imagery!!!

P.S I love your picture. Your beautiful.

-Zach

I love my crayons. :D lol

XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 05-16-2009 06:38 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thanks Klysta, and thanks Zach..
you just made my day a little brighter.

{~~*~~}


Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (05-16-2009 10:05 PM).]

nehematala
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4 posted 05-21-2009 04:16 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

this is really good

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

Suncleaver
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5 posted 05-28-2009 03:24 AM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

Really beautiful imagery Emily.
 
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