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XxForever.BrokenxX
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A whispering wind fills the air,
surrounding all that remains.
Gathering all the broken and bruised,
frighting the sun into the distance.
When clouds roll in like a wave from the sea,
I'll marvel at the sound of the storm.
Oblivious to the rain that is falling around,
camouflaging the warm tears on my skin.


{~~*~~}
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1 posted 05-15-2009 05:16 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

This is a nice gentle poem, consistent in tone, and with a poignant ending.  Well done.
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2 posted 05-15-2009 07:59 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I really like this Em.

-Zach

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em this is beautiful, absolutly beautiful.

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This is wonderful. I love it.

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 05-15-2009 11:15 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. It took me almost twenty minutes, believe it or not...

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

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6 posted 05-31-2009 01:56 AM       View Profile for Ethernaut   Email Ethernaut   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethernaut's Home Page   View IP for Ethernaut

Isn't it strange that the simplest poems take so long to write, yet the longest just flow right out.

There is nothing like a storm to bring peace and wash away the pain.

Beautiful

Beauty can be found in all places, even within the darkness of the soul.

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7 posted 05-31-2009 03:36 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This poem is amazing

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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