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fundip-cery
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0 posted 2009-05-13 08:17 PM


Love comes from tears
tears fall to quickly
quickly because you left me alone
alone and in the cold
while cold rushed threw my vains
vains full of pain and suffering
suffering because i thought i knew you
you who lied
lied about everything
everything that i livved for
for you who kept me breathing
breathing the air that you did
did when you told me i was worth a million golden stars
stars that shone brightly in the sky
sky that we looked at every night
night that was crisp but warm
warm of hope and peace
peace that i thought was love
love that became tears

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1 posted 2009-05-14 02:40 AM


Welcome to Passions

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2 posted 2009-05-14 03:15 PM


Welcome to Pip!!!

Nice write!

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

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