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Mary Had A Little Lamb

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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 05-12-2009 03:03 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

I don't really know if this belongs in teen, lol, but I put it here anyways.
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Mary had a little lamb,
who's eyes black as night.
And everywhere that lamb went,
fear arose from the streets.

This little lamb didn't want
to be so scary.
But there was nothing he could do
to stop what people thought.

All day and all night,
this little lamb prayed.
He prayed hard to become beautiful,
so that everyone would love him.

Mary had a little lamb,
who only wanted to be loved.
Too bad that day never came,
now he's here watching you.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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Kalysta
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1 posted 05-13-2009 11:42 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

Wow...Really good poem. Kinda dark but really good. 2 thumbs up!
    ~Kalysta~

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2 posted 05-14-2009 07:51 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I really like this. I never thought of rewriting a nursery rhyme. Good idea.

-Zach

I love my crayons. :D lol

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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haha, thanks zach and kalysta! i'm glad you liked it

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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