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Breaking Through

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Breaking Through

I take a deep breath.
It feels as though I'm struggling.
I'm scared.
What do I do?
I'm all alone with no one to guide me in my darkness.
It seems as though I'm going to surely fail.
I see a bright light and run towards it with everything I've got.
I run further and further but the light never gets any closer.
Eventually I get to a point of desperation.
Next thing I know I a hand comes out of nowhere and guides me to the light.
I look to see who the hand belongs to and find its you.


~Kalysta~

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Nice ending Kalysta, it caught me by surprise, always a good thing!
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