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A Little Sister Follows Me

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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
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0 posted 05-08-2009 11:20 PM       View Profile for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Email Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk

I wrote this one day after I was done daydreaming.
Please post replies I need the encouragement.

A careful girl I want to be
A little sister follows me
I don not dare go astray
For fear she'll go the selfsame way

I cannot once escape her eyes;
Whate'er she sees me do she tries;
Like me she says she's going to be-
That little sister following me

She thinks that I am good and fine;
Believes in every word of mine.
The bad in me she must not see-
That little sister following me.

I must remember as I go,
Through summer's sun and winter's snow,
I'm building for the years to be
That little sister following me.

© Copyright 2009 Sacha Aurora Henderson - All Rights Reserved
Alison
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1 posted 05-09-2009 12:14 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Hi PBcookies'nmilk,

I like this poem a lot.  I am the little sister of four older siblings and I think that they did take care to help me and shelter me.  Your poem reminds me of that time.

I think she is a very lucky little sister.  Do me a favor and tuck this away for her - some day she will treasure this poem.  

It's a keeper.

Alison
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2 posted 05-09-2009 10:19 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This is pretty good! I'm the second oldest of four brothers. My younger brother follows me just like your poem. I really liked this.
Keep writing.

-Zach

I love my crayons. :D lol

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Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here.   I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses.  Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together.  (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

All the best.

Rob - Moderator/Passions in Poetry
Kalysta
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4 posted 05-10-2009 07:08 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

I really love this poem. It really reminds me of my little sister. God knows she does everything i do. If i were to jump off a bridge she would follow me. Good write.

~Kalysta~

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5 posted 05-11-2009 01:35 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Welcome to pip!!!

I really like this, and I can relate. I have a lil sis, myself. She loves to do everything I do, and wear what I wear, but she is such a brat, lol.  

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
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KISSES,KISSES all around

[This message has been edited by Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk (05-12-2009 09:14 PM).]

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7 posted 05-12-2009 03:39 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

What a treasure this was, and I wish my oldest granddaughter would take this advice, so I printed it for her.  Welcome to Passions, you are going to enjoy it here.

Beautiful rhyming - enjoyed your work.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

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I love this
Looking forward to reading more from you!
Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
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Thank you all.

We are all unique  in Jesus' eyes.

nehematala
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10 posted 05-21-2009 04:14 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

I am the youngest but I live with my sister so I have 3 girls and 1 boy looking up to me.
Rosie_Orange
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11 posted 05-22-2009 03:25 PM       View Profile for Rosie_Orange   Email Rosie_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosie_Orange

I'm the only girl... i have three older brothers and every day when they came home from school i used to toddle around behind them! Your poem relates to so many people... well done!
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12 posted 05-24-2009 09:44 PM       View Profile for shattered-smiles   Email shattered-smiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shattered-smiles

wow.. great poem PBcookies'nmilk.. it reminds me so much of myself, except I have a little brother who looks up to me so much.  Sometimes it's hard to be the good example when you know you're nothing that even comes close, but when you remember their face in the back of your mind, you know that they will keep you going as you continue to show them the good in you.

my knuckles have turned to white, there's no turning back tonight ----- kiss me one last time [shut your eyes]

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