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KatVern17
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since 05-07-2009
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0 posted 05-08-2009 01:25 PM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

Something I wrote because I felt alone. And I was writing it as if I was talking to my sisters.
Itís me again and again
Iím here
Just like I said I would be
Forever and ever

When itís dark
And youíre scared
Iíll be there;
When youíre sad
And feeling down
Iíll be there;
When you want to talk
I promise you
Iíll be there

Itís me again and again
Iíll be here
Iíll be there
Just like I said I would be
Iíll be where you need me

I might not be there in person
But Iíll be there in sprit
I wonít leave you
No matter how much you hate me
I promise you Iíll be there

You can trust me
As much as I trust you
So here Iíll give you a hug
Just an ďIím hereĒ hug
You need it
And so do I
Itís me again and again
I wonít do what he has done
Iím here to stay
I wonít walk away
Yes, Iíll listen
You can talk

Itís me again and again
Iím here
Just like I said I would be
Forever and ever

Promise you
Promise that Iíll be there
Forever and ever
And that Iíll never leave

It's me again and again
I'm here
Just like I said I would be
Forever and ever
I'm not gonna leave

For it's me again and again
I'm here to stay
I'm not gonna leave
I love you with all my heart
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SarahJoyScott
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since 01-13-2011
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Finland


1 posted 02-10-2011 09:23 AM       View Profile for SarahJoyScott   Email SarahJoyScott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SarahJoyScott

This is such a strong poem, very intens!
It got me by surprise.

I was listening emotional music,
while reading this poem,
and I actualy started to cry.

Your words do so much to me in this poem.
You are very strong with words!

I CANNOT believe this didn't get any replies yet!
It's beautiful! This is a real piece of work

Sarah
KatVern17
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since 05-07-2009
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2 posted 02-14-2011 10:30 AM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

Thanks Sarah. I learned how powerful my words were when I was young. I've grown and now my poems show how much power. Thank you for commenting.

SarahJoyScott
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since 01-13-2011
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Finland


3 posted 02-17-2011 12:19 PM       View Profile for SarahJoyScott   Email SarahJoyScott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SarahJoyScott

You're welcome
HolsJoscelyne
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since 04-05-2011
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4 posted 04-05-2011 03:27 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Nice use of repetition, though I'm not sure the 'and again' is necessary unless you used it as a ' and again -' to lead on like a 'for example'

but it's so touching that you wrote a poem for your sister. x

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

KatVern17
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5 posted 04-06-2011 10:45 AM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

I used the "and again" as if im never leaving. because of the family issues.

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