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KatVern17
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since 05-07-2009
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0 posted 05-07-2009 11:44 PM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

this is a poem i wrote because of the things i have been going through. there is nothing that i can do to make it stop.


Half awake
Half asleep
Half alive
Half dead
But the pain remains

Nothing can be done
Nothing that I can do
Sit back and let the work be done
But nothing will stop
What he has done

Half awake
Half asleep
Half alive
Half dead
But the pain remains

See see
See what I mean
Hear listen
Watch the TV

Nothing is being done
As more and more comes
The pain will never be relieved
Oh me
Oh my
I hear thy cry

Sister
Brother
Mother
Friends
And neighbors
Come to thy side
And tell me what can be done

Half awake
Half asleep
Half alive
Half dead
But the pain must remain

What to do
When nothing can be done
When I hear thy cry
I hope he sees
What heís done

Family together
Family apart
My family will never be the same

Brick be my friend
Brick that I punch
Brick Iím sorry for the things Iíve done
But nothing else can be done

Run
Hide
The darkness is where Iíll be
For thy comfort

Hear my scream
Hear my cry
Listen by my side
But nothing I see
Can be done

Half awake
Half asleep
Half alive
And half dead
But the pain is here to remain

He likes her
But loves another
One that pulled my family apart
One that destroyed all

She must go
Far away from the family
She had destroyed
Oh no
She wonít stop
Tearing apart the good families


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Kalysta
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since 04-02-2009
Posts 41
Ohio


1 posted 05-10-2009 07:52 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

Hey this was really good. It seems as though your going through a really ruff time right now. But you have to remember that it will eventually get better. But i find that when im upset i feel better when i write in my journal or write a poem. Even if you dont share it, youll still feel much better. But anyways this was a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it. =-D

~Kalysta~

KatVern17
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since 05-07-2009
Posts 34


2 posted 05-10-2009 09:41 PM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

Thanks..I felt real good after writing this, and then felt even better after having someone read it.

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