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Rosie_Orange
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0 posted 05-06-2009 01:58 PM       View Profile for Rosie_Orange   Email Rosie_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosie_Orange

Black and white soldiers,
a marching pulse.
One step, two step,
Unlock beating keys.
Courage in their stance,
Arrogance assumes.
While ballerinas flock and sway,
their feet fall softly, swiftly
A choppy tune.
Melody and harmonies.
Ten fingers,
play an act.
Victory and triumph.
Pompous parades,
smiles and waves...

or
defeat, downfall,
a slow death march.

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1 posted 05-07-2009 03:32 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

This made me smile. It has a very springy, bouncy feel to it. I dont know much about non-rhyming poetry, so cant really crit, but i really liked this.
 
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