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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 05-04-2009 06:50 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Please don't take this down!!! It's a story of renewall, and freedom, and joy!!! It's a story of learning to get over things, and finally feel free.
thanks.


______________________________________________________________________
From what you see,
you don't have the right,
the right to judge me.
You don't know who I am,
or what I've done.
It all started two years ago,
as people began to talk.
Nothing ended, it just got worse.
Then suddenly,
I was left alone.

n u m b

c o l d

g o n e

a l o n e

f o r g o t t e n

I needed to do something,
so I turned to a knife.
This was the desperate plee,
to someone who'd listen...
too bad there was no one.
For weeks..months this went on,
until something clicked,
and I broke free.
I told the truth
to a stranger,
now lets hope this will help.

f r e e d o m

j o y

l o v e

p e a c e

h o p e

So here I am,
waiting for the next step.
Will you help me?
Will you love me?
I'm ready to move on,
I just need a helping hand.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

© Copyright 2009 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 05-04-2009 07:48 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

this doesn't glorify cutting honey...
it does show great strength, and if this is about you, and you told someone, then I'm really happy for you!

It's one step at a time, and it's learning to deal with the pain other than in a self destructive way.

hang in there.
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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thanks SEA for your support, it means alot to me.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Suncleaver
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3 posted 05-04-2009 10:17 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

I'm sorry to hear about your pain Julianna. This was a very well written freewrite. I hope that things get better for you.

It's been a while since we spoke, I'd appreciate you letting me know how you're doing.
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4 posted 05-04-2009 11:02 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Julianna, There's something about your words that touch the heart of everyone who reads. I don't know what it is but I feel really sorry for all that you've been through. But I'm glad that I was there to cheer up some of those days. Take your mind away form it just for a split second and make you laugh.

-Zach

I love my crayons. :D lol

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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haha, yes, thank you so much zach...i'll always be singing my song

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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I'm sorry you had such a rough time, i'm really happy you got   through it all! brilliant poem... it was so honest xx

Love, Peace, Chocolate *mmmmmm*

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thanks Rosie_Orange, I'm glad that I have your support as well...it really does mean alot to me.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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8 posted 05-05-2009 02:12 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

This is a great poem that explores the use of alternatives some people take before finally getting on the right track.  If this is about you, all I have to say is here's a hug for you, and I am sure you realize now that nothing is gained from this type of path.  ((hugs)) to you if it is.  Great job on your poem.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

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Thank you,it's about time someone put this pain into words.I told somebody, too.Maybe we'll get better together.
                         -Sacha

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yay sacha!!!! thats so exciting! i'm glad you did too

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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