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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2009-05-04 06:50 PM


Please don't take this down!!! It's a story of renewall, and freedom, and joy!!! It's a story of learning to get over things, and finally feel free.
thanks.


______________________________________________________________________
From what you see,
you don't have the right,
the right to judge me.
You don't know who I am,
or what I've done.
It all started two years ago,
as people began to talk.
Nothing ended, it just got worse.
Then suddenly,
I was left alone.

n u m b

c o l d

g o n e

a l o n e

f o r g o t t e n

I needed to do something,
so I turned to a knife.
This was the desperate plee,
to someone who'd listen...
too bad there was no one.
For weeks..months this went on,
until something clicked,
and I broke free.
I told the truth
to a stranger,
now lets hope this will help.

f r e e d o m

j o y

l o v e

p e a c e

h o p e

So here I am,
waiting for the next step.
Will you help me?
Will you love me?
I'm ready to move on,
I just need a helping hand.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

© Copyright 2009 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2009-05-04 07:48 PM


this doesn't glorify cutting honey...
it does show great strength, and if this is about you, and you told someone, then I'm really happy for you!

It's one step at a time, and it's learning to deal with the pain other than in a self destructive way.

hang in there.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 2009-05-04 10:07 PM


thanks SEA for your support, it means alot to me.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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3 posted 2009-05-04 10:17 PM


I'm sorry to hear about your pain Julianna. This was a very well written freewrite. I hope that things get better for you.

It's been a while since we spoke, I'd appreciate you letting me know how you're doing.

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4 posted 2009-05-04 11:02 PM


Julianna, There's something about your words that touch the heart of everyone who reads. I don't know what it is but I feel really sorry for all that you've been through. But I'm glad that I was there to cheer up some of those days. Take your mind away form it just for a split second and make you laugh.

-Zach

I love my crayons. :D lol

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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5 posted 2009-05-05 08:51 AM


haha, yes, thank you so much zach...i'll always be singing my song

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Rosie_Orange
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since 2009-04-20
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6 posted 2009-05-05 10:37 AM


I'm sorry you had such a rough time, i'm really happy you got   through it all! brilliant poem... it was so honest xx

Love, Peace, Chocolate *mmmmmm*

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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7 posted 2009-05-05 02:08 PM


thanks Rosie_Orange, I'm glad that I have your support as well...it really does mean alot to me.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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8 posted 2009-05-05 02:12 PM


This is a great poem that explores the use of alternatives some people take before finally getting on the right track.  If this is about you, all I have to say is here's a hug for you, and I am sure you realize now that nothing is gained from this type of path.  ((hugs)) to you if it is.  Great job on your poem.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
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9 posted 2009-05-07 07:56 PM


Thank you,it's about time someone put this pain into words.I told somebody, too.Maybe we'll get better together.
                         -Sacha


Just.Another.Falling.Star
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10 posted 2009-05-07 10:43 PM


yay sacha!!!! thats so exciting! i'm glad you did too

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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