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Adopted Kid Sick and Tired

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krad008
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0 posted 05-02-2009 10:19 AM       View Profile for krad008   Email krad008   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for krad008


I get mad at people
I get angry all the time now
My head always hurts
My back always hurts
Im always lost
I don't like where I live
The people here are different
Im ready to move on now
Im ready to start a new life
Im ready to leave
The only person who meant anything to me passed away
So its time to leave
Time to leave my adoptive parents
Time to go on a journey
Time to find out  who I really am
Time to start blending in with my people
Time to find a pretty girl
Time to find that special someone
I wanna find my Mom and Dad
I wanna visit Korea
I wanna be relaxed for once
I wanna be able to let my shoulders down
I wanna lower my guard for once
I wanna leave
I hate the people here
They make me mad
I always wanna fight annoying kids
I always try so much harder to be normal here
I always try to blend in
I always dress ten times nicer
I always try and look my best
But whats the point when you cant find that special girl here
Whats the point when you no your gonna end up with an Asian girl
Whats the point when your the 1% minority in your school
I put on a fake smile every day
It isnt me though
Its just a fake smile I have to put on
When I really hate this place

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1 posted 05-04-2009 05:27 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

there is beauty everywhere....look around you, it will be found in what you least expect....I wish you happiness to find what you are looking for...

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I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

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2 posted 05-05-2009 06:40 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

not knowing enough background for this poem, I would just like to say that it's not what goes on outside of you but what you hold inside that is important.

Look inward, learn to appreciate what you do have in the adoptive parents ( if you are not being abused) and be content that someone loved and wanted you enough to help give you a life.

When you are then able and capable of moving on, on your own, then do it. But don't COUNT on a girl  or love to be what makes you succeed in life or for your total happiness.

And if you really miss Korea, then work towards that goal and get involved with clubs or organizations that can help you reach that goal.


Wishing you contentment...

M
 
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