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Falling rain
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0 posted 04-29-2009 09:35 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Hey guys. Its been a while since I posted anything. I've been in a little writers block. My last post was much liked and I couldn't amount to writing equal to or greater then that. So here's just a little something. I want to revise this or at least use the same topic. Not my best work at all. This pic below doesn't relate to the poem but I liked it,   lol.

Sincerely,
Zachary.
Photography Graphics
You tell me in whispers
Of how much of me you adore
You touch my hand with ease
Like your begging for something more

Your hand brushes softly
Across my cold skin
You try to comfort me
But your not gonna win

Lets be honest for once
Answer me this
Did you think of me
when you gave her a kiss?

Was it that easy for you
To close your eyes
Put me away from your mind
Please honey! Spare me the lies

Did it have to boil to this point?
You could have been honest to me
And ask me just to leave
But that's not the case you see

You had to go fooling around
And leave me with a broken heart
Didn't bother to think twice
You just love to tear me apart

Well I'm not the victim tonight
I'm keeping me head held high
I'm not gonna be another fool
I'll leave with you asking "why?"
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-12-2009 03:06 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

oh my goodness. i can't believe no one's said anything about this yet.
this is by far, one of the best you've ever written. i almost can't believe it, lol.
amazing job zach, its wonderful.
library.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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2 posted 05-17-2009 10:09 PM       View Profile for Kalysta   Email Kalysta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kalysta

Zach,
I really like this it was really really really good. I read a lot of your work and it is truely one of your best. Keep up the good work.
~Kalysta~

~Kalysta~

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3 posted 05-21-2009 04:10 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

this is really good

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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4 posted 06-16-2009 02:19 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Zach honey how i have missed the thoughtful words your portray through pen. this was equally as good if not better than what I have come to miss so much
 
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