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My poor pet robot!!

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freeand2sexy
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Oh my poor pet robot
He thinks he's a princess
I caught him wearing make up
And dancing in a dress

He curtsied as he saw me
Then commanded me around
He said there was much to do
Before the queen comes into town

So I rewired his hard drive
And hoped it did some good
But then he started snorting
And not like someone should

Oh my poor pet robot
He thinks that he's a pig
I'll probably catch him in the mud
Wearing my pink wig

You laugh because I'm different...
I laugh cause I just farted!

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1 posted 04-29-2009 11:23 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

i really liked this poem it was very creative.

There was a sort if innocence about it that i loved too, as though you were a little kid stuck in your thoughts.
great write,
Lee

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Thomas Har

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Thank you! I like to think that I was inspired by the little kid inside of me. I had a lot of fun writing this poem.

You laugh because I'm different...
I laugh cause I just farted!

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3 posted 04-30-2009 04:37 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Lol. This was funny. It cheered me up.
I really needed this. Thanks! You should really say "hi" once in a while. I haven't talked to you in like forever. hehe
Much love!

-Zach

Today my name is colorful. Yesterday my name was dead souls. Tomorrow my name will be lively spirits. My friends think my name is fire. The police thi

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I'm really glad it cheered you up, Zach!!! I've been so busy lately (this online High school isn't as easy as it sounds) but I'll try to say hi more often, promise!

You laugh because I'm different...
I laugh cause I just farted!

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